Score: 7

"Woot :D"

submission: Kingdom Hearts Ch.6-8

date: October 9, 2009

At certain parts, the animation seemed choppy and the sound was a bit odd with random cut outs of sound. Though, the timing on the sounding was really good. If you need a Donald Duck voice actor, i can talk like him. Though, it's a little bit higher pitch, but hey, it's better than nothing. Good luck and i hope you continue this series, it's kinda cool.

Score: 3

"Well.."

submission: ROFL LOL (Misheard)

date: July 6, 2009

3/10 suffices for the lack of any difficult animation or artwork. I give you effort for putting time into it to try to sync as much up as you can between the music and the "animation".

That is where the heart of an animation lies, it didn't have much to do with the music choice, but if your trying to parody something like this, the lyrics have to be more deteriorated. Even though I love Disturbed as one of my favorite bands, i haven't ever had any problems mishearing the lyrics. I do find humor in some of this, but it's like trying to put words where they don't belong or something. The only difficult part (i think as possible) was where the song slowed down and he went in his creepy dark voice.

And for those who think he changed the lyrics, he didn't, if you don't read what he has as what he interpreted the song as, the song will sound the same. The reason for this is just psychological, you read it faster than you hear it, so your brain thinks what your reading is what your hearing and for some reason YOUR brain can't separate the two.

On your next "animation" put more animation in it than flashing black and white pictures (other than a still-frame shot of gen....). The music quality was the only thing worth mentioning, it sounded pretty clear rather than muffled and debuffed for media size.

Art: 2/10
Animation: 1/10
Audio: 8/10
Effort, 2/10
Overall: 3/10

Score: 8

"Absolutely brilliant"

submission: Ultra Sheriff - Nemesis

date: May 30, 2009

This was very well animated, i loved the whole look of everything in this flash. The drawings were fairly unique, the concept was very nice, the music and little tidbits of audio were perfect for this flash. Great job, i really hope to see more of these.

Sound: 9/10
Graphics: 8/10
Animation: 9.5/10
Originality: 9/10
Effort 9/10
overall: 8.5/10

Hope to see more. Can't think of too many cons worth mentioning right now.

Score: 5

"Not too shabby."

submission: Sunshine's Sonic Shorts 1

date: May 1, 2009

I can't give you TOO much on score, but I can try to give some pointers. I understand that it is a lot of work and you want to rush to get it done to get that great feeling of submitting you put your heart into. But for other people to enjoy it you do have to tween a little bit more and draw more frames. It is fairly hard unless you have a stylus, even then it's still very tedious.

I will admit that it was a very clean sketching of the characters, I liked that considerably. What i didn't like was the fact that there wasn't much movement in the characters. There was little bits, but there wasn't too much. You do know how to work the program, which is good. The only step your missing is the extra movement frames. Because through most of it, there was just the same repeating movie clips, not too much in creativity. The audio was fairly good.

Keep working on it, you do have a lot of potential with this flash, there just isn't much movement, frame wise. Keep it up, just put a little more effort with the different motion tweens. Good luck.

Score: 6

"Haha, great"

submission: S&M Birthday Short

date: March 31, 2009

I like the single joke in it quite a bit, this style of animation isn't too bad. There wasn't too much movement, so i just rated appropriately. Voices were pretty good, liked the animation style, liked the joke, in the long run, i liked the little short.

Style: 7/10
Animation: 5/10
Graphics (drawings): 5/10
Audio: 7/10
Overall: 7+7 + 5 + 5 = 24/40 = 6/10 = 3/5

Nice job, i'll be looking for more. Don't take a 6/10 too harshly, i've been grading flash more accurately than i was before.

Score: 7

"Fairly good game"

submission: Blackboard Squash

date: March 21, 2009

I liked it for a little while, but when i got to level 10 and didn't lose a life because it was so easy, i got bored and quit. I do like the style and overall look of the game. It was a nice idea, but for some reason it didn't challenge me. Otherwise nice job, not too good of replay value imo. Oh, and try to put more music into the game other than just the one song, that loop got a little annoying after listening to it 2 going on 3 times

Score: 8

"Lol"

submission: Weebl and Bob : Gooshine

date: March 10, 2009

The movie Sunshine that your referencing was a pretty good movie, this flash of it is like a funny reenactment of it. I honestly enjoyed it, the graphcis are, of course, weeble and bob style, so it's still consistent. The humor was pretty decent, it was kinda more funny watching it having seen the movie. Nice job, keep up the good work :).

Score: 0

"Unlike what you say..."

submission: Freezepop's JEM!

date: February 23, 2009

In the comment section of your "flash". There isn't any "flash" involved in this live action movie, other than the "censor" blue on the hoodie, if you want to call it "flash". But My reasoning for 0 stars is more just than the '"UR GHEY!"' that you say most of your viewers do. I watched the entire thing and was fairly disappointed in the lack of effort for this live action music video.

I suggest that the next time you do a "flash" like this that you draw with at least paint and stream the pictures together, or use clay if your going to do live action. That way it could be more considered artistic than you dancing horrifically on the screen and calling it a flash animation.

Again, just try to do a music video with drawn or constructed characters rather than your video camcorder. Good luck next time.

Animation: 0 there is none
Style: 0 No creative or unique artistic values
Graphics: 0 it's live action
Story: 0 There is none
Overall: 0 Stands justified.

Score: 5

"Nice Job!"

submission: Maze Game Play-52

date: February 4, 2009

I thank you for listening to the improvements that some of the other newgrounders, including myself, asked you to fix from your last maze. This one seemed to flow a little better and the dot was a lot easier to control than the last one i remember playing. Though i can't give you too high a score, please know that you did improve on your game and i think that it is great that you listen to your fellow newgrounders. Again, sorry about the lower score, but the next thing to do is learn how to make more levels in a single game, or, take all the puzzles you have now and put them all in to one game and make a big collection of mazes without a timer or with a timer that counts forward and submit it as a score like that.

Otherwise, nice job, just work on a level system to keep people more entertained, rather the 60 seconds to complete a single maze.

Score: 8

"Great"

submission: Like Poetry

date: January 29, 2009

It was a fairly touching piece in my opinion. The dark colors with the very smooth animation made it fit the music perfectly. It doesn't really pull you down as much as would be expected with an opening like such. But instead it kinda just reminiscences on the happy times spent with the cat, and the things the cat would do as part of the main characters habits. In the end it was fairly magnificent with the tree and toy that was used as a friend for the cat. It wasn't really as depressing as some others have claimed it to be.

But anyway, very nice job.:
Sound: 8/10
graphics: 9/10
Creativity: 7/10
Animation: 8/10
Overall: 8/10

Nice work, hope to see more, do improve a little bit, in this particular piece i cannot recommend much, but find flaws on your own so you can become a greater artist :).